Vitruvian Erik - pencil

My house is redecorating, and part of this involves us inserting each other (NOT in an X-rated way!) into famous works of art. So this is Erik as Leonardo da Vinci's Vitruvian Man!! Photo and life references used.
I also intend to put some "mirror writing" on the final version to hang ... except it will be Tengwar!!! :evil: muahahahahaha!!!
Medium: Mechanical pencil on sketchbook paper
Time: about 3 hours or so.

SHOULD I INK THE OUTLINE????
Critique please!!

oh also the apple logo is (c) Apple

EDIT: Added a background and changed the line color!!! Thanks to *Gold-Seven's tutorial for that idea.

OK another edit: the model has joined dA!! Go say hi to ~DownerShield!